Feedback as an Interface: Controlling Form and Detail in LLM Translation Refinement

Abstract

Feedback presentation shapes how LLMs use evaluator judgments during translation refinement. We introduce a machine translation protocol that keeps the evaluator score, main issue, and recommendation fixed while varying feedback form and supporting detail. Across seven models and six translation directions, low-load feedback outperforms high-load feedback in all 42 translator-direction settings under xCOMET. On the 29,400-record rewriting subset, mean xCOMET scores multiplied by 100 are 83.30 for low-load feedback and 80.67 for high-load feedback; the full-matrix original-translation reference mean is 83.46. MetricX-24 supports the low-load advantage on a stratified subset. A no-feedback second pass yields a small improvement over the original translations, and direct evaluator prompting reproduces the low-load advantage without a separate rewriting stage. These results show that compact feedback limits the quality loss from evaluator-guided refinement in the evaluated high-resource MT settings.